I thought I would share the prologue of the second novel in my Progeny series today. It still needs a little work, but I feel it is evocative enough to deal with any commentary. :)
PROLOGUE
Carlos called no particular place home yet this location came as close as any. The day had waned and twilight was creeping in on the dilapidated ruins of the West Park Asylum in Surrey. Carlos, young and mocha-shinned, lingered here, in the silence of ruins, among the broken ovens and rusted frames of one of the long-unused stainless steel kitchens which sat in situ beneath the rows of skylight windows overhead. The baby blue of the atmosphere miles above shifted to a darker, navy blue as dusk closed in. Carlos knew Samuel would be here soon. He had seen it. What he had not seen, and could not for some reason, was what happened next. This fact, against his ability to foresee the future, worried him to no end. Such a blank spot in his own future had happened only once before, and that incident he chose not to dwell upon.
He shuffled closer to the center of the room, away from the deepening shadows which crept down from the walls and edged nearer to his position. The smell of the stagnant water that lay puddled beneath a leak in one of the skylights mingled with the rusty aroma of the chipped and crumbling red brick walls encasing the expansive space. Carlos noted the smells, once familiar and safe, now held a sense of foreboding that sent a chill tracing the length of his spine.
He felt the unnatural altering of the room’s temperature and wrapped his arms around himself in a less than comforting hug. The shadows mutated by the tall swinging doors through which the staff once entered and exited the kitchen. The darkness elongated, flowed against the natural shift of the failing light, and stretched outward toward Carlos. He watched as the peculiar tide of shadow then rejoined with the main body and deepened, forming an ink spot against the lighter tones of shadow.
The ink spot congealed and formed into a silhouette, which then sculpted itself into a tall, dark man who appeared to be in his mid-twenties. He had a scruff of days-old beard, the outline of a goatee thicker and darker than the rest, and not a hair on his head. Whether the baldness was by choice or genetics, Carlos could not tell. The man stepped from the shadows and closed on Carlos, who backed away, maintaining his distance from the man.
“You do me an injustice, Oracle,” the man said to Carlos, feigning offense and calling the boy by his disliked nickname. “I mean you no harm.”
“You lie,” Carlos replied, continuing the dance to keep his distance from the man.
“Do I?” Samuel stopped and stared. “Do you know who I am?” Carlos nodded. Samuel pursed his lips and nodded once in return. “I see. So, you have some idea of what I want?” Another nod. “Excellent. Then we should get down to business.” In the blink of an eye, Samuel melted into the shadows that surrounded them and faded from sight.
Carlos twirled in circles searching for any sign of Samuel’s reappearance. He darted for the swinging doors only to have the foreboding demigod emerge from the shadows, blocking his path.
“This is an interesting place,” Samuel stated, his hands clasped behind his back. He wore a dark blue jean jacket that fell open in front to reveal his black t-shirt. The jacket matched his jeans and, as he walked about the room, his engineer boots clomped on the cold concrete floor. “Did you know that this hospital could house upwards of two thousand patients at the height of its capacity? It even had its own railway for a period of time. But, that was removed by 1950. Can’t really tell it was even here any longer. Time decays all.” The man opened his arms in a sign of innocence, continuing to stroll in a circle around Carlos, his heavy boots always touching the shadows stretching out from the walls. “I told you, Oracle. I’m not here to harm you. However, if you test my patience again by attempting to leave before giving me what I want, my objectives may shift accordingly. Do we understand each other?”
Carlos watched Samuel’s eyes, dark and unblinking. He nodded in surrender and moved back to the center of the room and sat cross-legged on the cold concrete floor. Whatever his fate may now be, he was flying blind. Just like everyone else who was not the child of Apollo.
“Fine,” he said to the man. “I think I know what you want, but—“
“Allow me to enlighten you,” Samuel said, returning his hands to clasp behind his back. “I want to know about the Tome. The Red Tome. How do I find it?”
“I don’t know,” Carlos replied.
“I don’t believe you.”
“It’s true. I have no idea where it is.”
“Ah,” said Samuel, a smile creeping across his scruffy face, “but, I did not ask you where it was. No. I asked you how I find it. I know all of your little fortuneteller tricks. You can see so much.” Samuel paused in his movement and faced Carlos. “Try for me, Oracle. Try and do not fail.”
Carlos realized what Samuel really wanted. The fear of what the request could mean drove cold chills down Carlos’ spine. He wasn’t even certain he could do what the man was asking. Even if he did, he was almost positive that it would be his last look into the future. He watched as Samuel tilted his head toward him, the man’s thoughts turning dark over what would be his next steps should Carlos refuse. Taking a deep breath, the son of Apollo nodded at Samuel and closed his eyes. He concentrated on slowing his breathing, difficult with such threat staring down at him. Nevertheless, he attempted to relax, to open his mind, to focus his thoughts.
Carlos’ head lolled down, chin to chest, as he swayed side-to-side seated upon the cold concrete. A hum emanated from him as he began to sing-song words as they came to him from some distant possibility, some future that may or may not occur. “Retrieve the Tome from nothingness and see,” he sang, “that what was the future shall never be.” The words echoed through the disused kitchen. Carlos’ eyes fluttered as he began to return from his precognizant trance.
“Hmnh,” Samuel murmured, his lips once again pursed in thought. “Interesting.”
Carlos opened and closed his eyes, clearing his head of the fuzziness which came as part and parcel of his visions. He noticed Samuel was pacing around the edge of the room once again, his eyes never leaving Carlos for more than a second or two. Carlos stood in order to face him, just as the man stopped and peered with purpose at him.
“You know who I am, so you have a clue as to what I am capable of. Correct?” Carlos nodded in response, afraid to say anything. Samuel returned the nod. “I ask you to be fully aware that my goal in coming here was not to do you any harm. I stated as much earlier. I will move on about on my journey, leaving you to your pitiful, solitary life here. However,” he continued, “should you find it necessary to inform any other person, living or dead, about our little visit, I will shift my priorities. At that point, make no mistake, my goal will be to do as much harm to you as I possibly can prior to releasing you from your so-called life. Do I make myself perfectly clear?”
Carlos nodded with enthusiasm as Samuel stepped back into the shadows and melted away into darkness, leaving the oracle to slump his shoulders in relief and apprehension. Samuel was on the same path as Alexis. Carlos knew that Alexis was not your average demigod. Still, she was young and inexperienced. He hoped that the daughter of night would survive the coming confrontation with Samuel. Not many did when crossing the son of Hades.
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