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Excerpt: Given No Halo

Since I have been oh-so-lacking in my updates, I thought I would get back to the Fri­day Writ­ing cat­e­gory and share a lit­tle of the upcom­ing Prog­eny novella, Given No Halo. This one is inspired by my late, great friend, Angel. I promised her I would make her a demigod char­ac­ter and I keep my promises. It is told from her per­spec­tive and this is just some raw writ­ing, so take it as such.

The story is about the daugh­ter of Ares, the Greek god of war. Only Angel doesn’t keep the fam­ily tra­di­tion very well. Still, her nature and moti­va­tions sure as hell keep her in the thick of things. When she inter­venes in a domes­tic vio­lence sit­u­a­tion, what begins as a sim­ple warn­ing turns into a des­per­ate fight for the sur­vival of hun­dreds of thou­sand s of inno­cent lives at the hand of one of Angel’s old ene­mies. The past can some­times catch up to you in the worst pos­si­ble way. Hope­fully, Angel will sur­vive to tell the tale.

GIVEN NO HALO

Excerpt: “Beaten”

 I fum­bled with the lock and let my weight fall against the door. It gave way and I strug­gled to main­tain my foot­ing. Christ! I hurt every­where. Those bas­tards were going to pay for this. I should’ve known he would behind it all. I should’ve killed him when I had the chance. All those years ago, I would never have thought he would come this far. He had at least twenty men at that com­pound. I was stu­pid. Those are the kind of mis­takes I can’t afford to make.

I wiped the blood from my mouth, brush­ing it along the rear end of my jeans like some half-assed painter. I needed some ice. Stum­bling for the kitchen, one eye swollen almost shut, I fum­bled at the buckle of my hol­ster belt with the fin­gers on my good left hand. I knew at least two of the ones on my right were bro­ken. I’d have to reset them before the heal­ing kicked in. First, ice.

I let the belt fall to my calves as I fid­dled with the leather strings hold­ing the hol­sters to my thighs. It fell with a muf­fled thump and I moved to the refrig­er­a­tor. Shov­el­ing a hand­ful of ice into a damp hand towel, I tied the ends together and eased it to my face, breath­ing a sigh of minor relief.

How the hell did Sofia get tan­gled up with that guy. Shit. This was going to get messy. Not that it was any walk in the fuck­ing park as it stood. At least I was alive. Barely.

I plopped down on the sofa, lay­ing back and clos­ing my eyes beneath the cool cloth. Sit­u­at­ing the icy cloth over the bridge of my nose, I felt the fin­gers on my right hand. The mid­dle one and the pinky fin­ger, both bro­ken. I gri­maced and jerked them back into a decent sem­blance of nor­mal­ity, huff­ing out the pain through my blood­ied mouth. I felt the blood fly off into the unseen dis­tance. Great. I was going to need some seri­ous clean­ing in this place, now. Maybe I could hire one of those crime scene crews with­out too much hub­bub. Worth a shot.

I was drift­ing off, let­ting the heal­ing begin when I heard the door swing open. I got ready, retriev­ing the Firestorm I kept hid­den in the sofa cush­ions. Call me para­noid, but one can never have enough guns stashed for a rainy day. To my sur­prise, it was Sofia. I sup­pose I was really a sight to see, all beaten and blood­ied. She gasped, her hand over her mouth and rushed to my side.

What hap­pened?” she asked, one hand reach­ing out but stop­ping just before touch­ing my split lip, while the other dropped her purse by the sofa.

Grist hap­pened. It was a set up.” It was funny hear­ing my words, all wet and slurred. I needed rest and time to heal. “What’re you doing here?” I won­dered how she even knew where I lived. Not that it wasn’t a pleas­ant sur­prise. Those mocha eyes stared into mine for a long moment.

I got your address from Con­nie. I just wanted to thank you.” She paused, star­ing at me from head to foot. “Why can’t you let things go?”

Not in my nature, toots,” I replied. Some­how I had not noticed, but I felt that a few ribs might be cracked, as well. When I get my hands on Grist…

Well, at least let me take care of you. Where is your first aid kit?”

Under the bath­room sink. Down the hall to the left.” I lay there and bled while she retrieved the over-utilized kit.

Not much left in here,” she com­mented, as she rum­maged through for some anti­sep­tic pads. “You might want to restock.”

Right.” It was all I could man­age. I could feel my body begin­ning the heal­ing process. Thank the gods for deific par­ents. At least I got some­thing out of the whole thing. I won­dered if he could see me now. Prob­a­bly not all too proud of his daugh­ter at the moment, I bet.

Why are you doing this?” I asked, my body begin­ning to relax after all of the adren­a­lin and stress of the last cou­ple of hours.

Some­one has to take care of you,” she replied with a strange tone in her voice. “And, I’m just the per­son to do it.”

I was about to thank her, when I felt the nee­dle go through my jeans and enter my thigh. I jerked awake, fling­ing the cloth full of ice at Sofia, knock­ing her back­wards. That should end up a very nice black eye. I stood, ready to kick her ass even in my cur­rent state when I felt the drugs. What­ever she used, it was damned pow­er­ful. Most seda­tives don’t have much effect on me, with my her­itage and all. But, I sure as hell felt this stuff. Damn.

Why?” I asked as the world spun and I fell back onto the sofa. She stood and looked down at me. She was fad­ing into the dark­ness of my unconsciousness.

I had no choice. He made me do it.”

Her lovely face was lost to the blackness.

 

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Giveaway: The Weight Of Night

 

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The Weight Of Night by C.L. Stegall

The Weight Of Night

by C.L. Ste­gall

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Big Ol’ Writing Goals

Title_______________RED TOME

Sub-Title___________Book Two of The Progeny

Cur­rent Word Count__4,300

Goal Word Count____110,000

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It has begun!

It took me seven years to write my first novel, The Weight Of Night, a tale of demigods and gods, of love and loss and treach­ery and des­tiny. To be receiv­ing the won­der­ful reviews and rat­ings I have been receiv­ing is kind of over­whelm­ing! It gives me hope that I might just have a future at this writ­ing thing.

I’ve been a busy boy since TWoN was pub­lished, in Jan­u­ary 2011. I’ve co-founded an inde­pen­dent writ­ers’ co-op; I’ve released a few shorts for the Kin­dle; and, I’ve writ­ten and pub­lished a nov­el­ette of The Prog­eny called Trin­kets And Arrows. TAA is based upon TWoN in a way…it is Lily Abrams’ *ori­gin tale*, relat­ing how she first came to under­stand her role as a demigod and her first meet­ing with the Greek god of the sun and of prophecy, Apollo.

I have a cou­ple of other novelettes/novellas that take place in the world of the Prog­eny, but I knew I had to dive back in and con­tinue Alexis’ story.

In TWoN, Alexis spent most of the time try­ing to grasp who she truly was and what she might be capa­ble of; whereas, now, as she and Keats and Lily move into even more dan­ger­ous ter­ri­tory, she pretty much under­stands who she is. For bet­ter or worse. Alexis begins to real­ize that she has a lot of her mother, Nyx, in her than she would pre­fer, actu­ally. As her rela­tion­ship with Keats grows, she also has to deal with a level of emo­tion with which she is cer­tainly not famil­iar. This, of course, can only lead to trouble.

With Red Tome, the next book in the series, I have sev­eral goals in mind. Very spe­cific goals. Alexis and her expand­ing lev­els of emo­tion, her dif­fi­culty in deal­ing with them is one of those goals. We all expe­ri­ence a crazy level of emo­tion once we hit puberty, it’s called life. How­ever, with Alexis, once she hit puberty, her lev­els of emo­tion shifted in the oppo­site direc­tion, due to her her­itage. So how does one deal with such things? How does a beau­ti­ful girl, who real­izes that love is tak­ing hold in her heart, face the fact that she places that love in dan­ger every step she takes?

I have my work cut out for me, don’t I?

In future entries, here at The Green Room, I will talk about how things are going with the writ­ing of Red Tome, as well as dig into some other goals I have for the book (and the one after). So look for me to dig a lit­tle deeper into the psy­che of a writer, the depth of fic­tional char­ac­ters and the tra­vails of plot­ting a novel. Oh! FUN!

By the way, are you a writer? Have you ever set out spe­cific goals in your writ­ing? What were they? Did you accom­plish them? Did you even get around to attempt­ing them? I’d love to hear you thoughts on the subject!

Good writ­ing, my friends!

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Books To Love Forever

Favorite books I was con­vers­ing via email with one of my heroes this week: Allan Cole. You see, I’m reread­ing “Sten”, his novel with Chris Bunch, for…oh, per­haps the eleventh time. If you haven’t read ay of Allan and Chris’ Hol­ly­wood Misadv…

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